Top Choice Admissions
Top Choice Admissions
A high-achieving senior with an impressive résumé, but no clear story tying it together, and a college list that didn't yet reflect where she'd actually stand out.
A high-achieving senior with an impressive résumé, but no clear story tying it together, and a college list that didn't yet reflect where she'd actually stand out.
Name Corp
High-achieving U.S. senior
Name Corp
High-achieving U.S. senior
Manager
Narrative development & college fit
Manager
Narrative development & college fit


The situation
The situation
On paper she was impressive, but her application read like a list of accomplishments rather than a story. She hadn't settled on a college list that matched her actual strengths, and without a clear throughline, admissions officers would have had no reason to remember her.
On paper she was impressive, but her application read like a list of accomplishments rather than a story. She hadn't settled on a college list that matched her actual strengths, and without a clear throughline, admissions officers would have had no reason to remember her.
What we did
What we did
We worked with her to identify the throughline connecting her academic and extracurricular record, sharpened her positioning around it, and rebuilt her college list around schools where that story would actually land. Her essays and activities list were revised to support one clear narrative instead of several competing ones.
We worked with her to identify the throughline connecting her academic and extracurricular record, sharpened her positioning around it, and rebuilt her college list around schools where that story would actually land. Her essays and activities list were revised to support one clear narrative instead of several competing ones.


Outcome
With a focused narrative and intentional positioning, she submitted applications that clearly reflected who she was, why she wanted each school, and why she'd thrive there.
With a focused narrative and intentional positioning, she submitted applications that clearly reflected who she was, why she wanted each school, and why she'd thrive there.
Key Achievement
Key Achievement
Admitted to the Wharton School at the University of Pennsylvania
Admitted to the Wharton School at the University of Pennsylvania
Client Impact
Client Impact
She went from having a strong resume to having a strong case, an application that answered "why her" instead of leaving it to the reader to guess.
She went from having a strong resume to having a strong case, an application that answered "why her" instead of leaving it to the reader to guess.
"I met with three different college counselors before choosing Momentum, and I'm so glad I did. They were the only ones who really took the time to get to know me and my goals, and they helped me develop a realistic plan for achieving them. I couldn't have gotten into my dream school without their help."
Momentum Client -
UChicago '27

"I met with three different college counselors before choosing Momentum, and I'm so glad I did. They were the only ones who really took the time to get to know me and my goals, and they helped me develop a realistic plan for achieving them. I couldn't have gotten into my dream school without their help."
Momentum Client -
UChicago '27

"I met with three different college counselors before choosing Momentum, and I'm so glad I did. They were the only ones who really took the time to get to know me and my goals, and they helped me develop a realistic plan for achieving them. I couldn't have gotten into my dream school without their help."
Momentum Client -
UChicago '27

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